Saturday, July 28, 2007

Southern Summer Night

Perhaps somewhere in the South
the myth is real: People sip
mint juleps and watch
the sun set and the night
brings peace.

In my South
someone's music throbs
like a headache
down the street and
the katydids scream all night
in the trees.

Mosquitoes seek to suck
any bare flesh
and no cold drink can drive away
this damned humidity
which lingers all night
and all day again
and forever
at least until fall.

5 comments:

Princess Banter said...

Very profound and noteworthy. I especially like the second stanza. I could almost hear the music and feel it throbbing in my head...

Eastcoastdweller said...

Thank You, Princess.

Would You believe that this little verse was born tonight as I took out the garbage?

Lance Abel said...

Nice!
I'd like to see the anthology, when done!

Eastcoastdweller said...

Thank you, Lance! You'll get a free copy since you were first to ask.

Glad to have you back commenting again!

Eastcoastdweller said...

Thank You, Carmen.